Wednesday, July 19, 2006

Redirecting

When the sun
Shines on your face
You close your eyes
and don’t accept
that my loneliness
is the distance
between knowing
and understanding

15 Comments:

Anonymous Anonymous said...

شايد خدا آنجاست
بين دانستن
و ندانستن
تا جهان باقي ست مرزي هست
همچنان بوده ست
تا جهان بوده ست

كوتاه و زيبا بود..

3:14 pm, July 19, 2006  
Blogger Sarah said...

closing the eyes
bring momentary darkness
while you take
time to travel across..

4:08 pm, July 19, 2006  
Blogger m.reza said...

شاید، خزان عزیز، شاید

1:50 pm, July 20, 2006  
Blogger m.reza said...

in the void, Sarah,

1:51 pm, July 20, 2006  
Blogger November Rain said...

and in the distance
I hear a faint whisper
a gentle tear
where the wind blows
from the shadows
of the sun
alone

hi sorry I was AFK when you pmed me... happens alot

Dream Interpretations... I wrote a post on it and gave an example one time
if you go to novy's update I have them linked or you can go here

http://caroladawn.blogspot.com/2006/02/dream-interpretations.html
and here
http://caroladawn.blogspot.com/2006/02/friday.html

:) you can also email me :)no spam please :))

2:49 pm, July 20, 2006  
Blogger Karin said...

"... the distance between knowing and understanding"! I like that a lot ...
You start out very bright and optimistic ... and end in melancholy and almost sadness - it's a wide span of emotions!
LOVELY poem!!

3:20 pm, July 20, 2006  
Blogger jac said...

It is a temporary illusion, reza !

It has nothing to do with real loneliness. The words are no doubt lovely.
:)

1:26 am, July 21, 2006  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

salam nazanine man
mrc ke sar zadin
blog zibaii darin gole man
khoshhalam ke ghabel doonestin va oomadin
va khoshhaltar misham ke har vaghat up kardin khabram konin
fadatoon besham
madar
farya

10:24 am, July 22, 2006  
Blogger Othersideblue said...

Don't surrender your loneliness
Let it cut more deep

Let it ferment and season you
as few human
Or even divine ingredients can

1:21 pm, July 23, 2006  
Blogger m.reza said...

dear November Rain, "my words but a whisper, your deafness a shout" thanks for coming, i will email you what i wanted to ask you. it was a very strange dream that i cant figure it out. cheers.

10:01 am, July 26, 2006  
Blogger m.reza said...

thanks Karin, from one extreme to the other, in just a few sentences, me like it too!!!!!!!ha ha ha

10:03 am, July 26, 2006  
Blogger m.reza said...

Illusion Jac? Isn’t what life is? A very long dream?

10:05 am, July 26, 2006  
Blogger m.reza said...

mamnon Farya aziz, hatman.

10:06 am, July 26, 2006  
Blogger m.reza said...

OSB!
...

10:07 am, July 26, 2006  
Blogger jac said...

Yes it is... or you can call it a mirrage.

8:26 pm, July 26, 2006  

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