Remember
I have slept in the maze of freedom
I have run all the paths of defeat
I have seen all the trembling tingles of affection in fright
I have walked all the beams of a flickering light
of a candle flame
Dancing like an orphan moth,
no one to blame
Day comes and day goes by
And each evening brings all my memories back
Once I knew the destination and departure lane
But when it comes to it
I forget, what I should pack
I have run all the paths of defeat
I have seen all the trembling tingles of affection in fright
I have walked all the beams of a flickering light
of a candle flame
Dancing like an orphan moth,
no one to blame
Day comes and day goes by
And each evening brings all my memories back
Once I knew the destination and departure lane
But when it comes to it
I forget, what I should pack
posted by m.reza at 11:55 am
12 Comments:
Hi dear friend ! it was a nice peom . i enjoyed it alot . thanks .
It is really nice,(Ich glube!) one of your best … the whole parts of it …especially “ I have seen all the trembling tingles of affection in fright…I have walked all the beams of a flickering light” … how long way you passed …how wet space you dwelled in …your moments are precious as much as they were difficult … they have left you a great attitude …
Beautiful
The way you write
Cuts deep
your emotions
like a river
flowing down.
hamamun hamin karo mikonim faghat to nisti,tekrare eshtebahat . tekrare hameye amali ke be talkhi be dard be tars va... montahi shodan.mokarar.mokarar va mokarar.mohem ine ke moteassefane baz ham eshtebah mikonim gahi ahmaghane tar az sabegh va baz ham tajarobe talkh ro faramush mikonim va baz tekrar.va baz....ama belakhare ye ja vaymisim shayad dir ama in ettefagh miofte.negaran nabash.
May be there is nothing to be packed...
Dear windmills of mind,
Thanks for your comment, although it looks more like a statement, which really doesn’t belong to comment’s section. And also I wasn’t sure if it is to me!? I only have one weblog and you are in it. Cheers.
حتما برای ننه سرما زیاد مزه می ریزی که ولت نمی کنه...
مگه میشه با تو نامهربون بود ... بامزه ای ... مگه نیستی!؟ ...هنوز اون شاخ ه یادم نرفته :))...بعد این تویی که گل می زنی تو تیم خودی ... می ره می زنی رو حرف من ...بابا مخالف ...جدای از این شوخی ها ...ارادتمندیم ...
درود بر تو دوست من . خوشحالم میبینمت .
I forget what I should pack!!
too in nokte hamamun mesle hamim ... chera??
But what I should pack?
man charandiatam tah keshide,to ke shaeri,to chera neminevesi?
Why have you stopped writing?
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